雅思写作考试第二部分为大作文,需要学生在40 分钟内完成一篇字数最少为250字的议论文写作,对试题提供的某些看法进行讨论,或者对某些社会现象问题进行剖析。这个部分在整个写作考试中占时最久,评分所占比率最大,是不少考生一直烦恼怎么样顺利完成的部分,不少考生考试前背诵了不少范本,却还是感觉很难下手;即使努力拼凑完成后,也不尽符合雅考虑官的评分需要导致得分不理想。甚至不少已经在校通过大学四,六级的学生也感觉以前不少很有用的写作套路,在这个部分也惨遭滑铁卢。
可是,雅思作文真的是不可能完成的任务吗?为何大家付出了很多的时间和精力,一直冲不过作文6分那根终点线呢?事实上,在不少考生筹备过程中,可能根本没知道或只有部分学会雅思作文的写作标准与需要,进而白花了大量的力气(譬如,机械的记忆很多雅思范本)。今天,大家依据一篇雅思8分范本,为大伙揭开雅思作文的神秘面纱,看看一篇符合雅思标准的作文要那些品质保障。
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task and write at least 250 words.
Some people believe that students who go directlyfrom high school to university benefitless from their courses than those who take a job or travel in the real world before they enter the university. What is your opinion?
依据对题目的问话方法what is your opinion?的剖析,本文是陈述个人看法文章,重点在于提出个人看法并对此进行支持论证。这类的文章,在雅考虑试中占一半以上,考生在筹备考试时应该给予肯定的看重。
考试试题第一句话为背景介绍。考生应该迅速画出这句话中与论题(TOPic)有关的重点信息点(譬如:who, what, where, when, why),并依据这类信息点进行对话题看法作出考虑(brainstorming)。可以写出尽量多的与这类关键词眼有关的其他的词汇或参考容易见到的看法考虑方向(譬如:涉及人,可以考虑身体与精神方面),从而完成写作前的筹备工作。为了节省写作时间和提升写作水平,需要考生必须要在写作前,依据看法的考虑,写下提纲,中英文都可以。(这是根治写作中容易见到的意识流问题最好的办法。)
关键字语选择及扩展:
Students: high school students, college/university students, high school graduates, pupil, freshmanin a university, learner, etc.
High school: secondary1 education, middle school, etc.
University: college, higher education, further education, institution, etc.
Before they enter the university: gapyear, before college years, before getting enrolled2 in university, etc.
Take a job: obtain working experience, get employment3, work in a company, hand-on experience, etc.
Course: subject, major, classroom learning4, school life, academiclearning, etc.
例文如下:
Nowadays most students start their higher education immediately after their graduation from high school.However, some people think that students shall benefit more from their courses if they work for some time to obtain some hand-on experience before they enter university.(转述另一种学生状况)Personally, I think they are right.(论题句,交待个人看法)
开头段主要用于交代讨论话题,表明作者看法。建议考生最好效果最好的办法就是单刀直入,点到即可。具体的论述可以留在主体段扩展。注意,这段是考官必读段,也是第一印象。第一印象有时就是最后印象,所以肯定注意这个段落的语言正确性。也可以适合注意语言的地道表达,建议筹备一些最好的表达看法的地道的表达,譬如名词性从句,被动语态等(e.g. It is claimed that+看法)。
因为篇幅有限,在本次文章中就先对此题假如开头作了详细的例证,那样怎么样进步和深入我们的看法,将会在后面的文章中逐步展开。